Floom film — modular status

The whole film as modules. What's locked, what's building, what's still open.

LOCKED — signed off BUILDING — decided, in the next render/pass OPEN — needs your input or not yet started

Beats

L01locked

OpenClaw hook

real logo + founder. "scammed us."

L02building

the dream

bubbles + chat (anim ✓, bigger ✓). chat name → OpenClaw pending.

L03building

it broke

bubbles burst + chat glitch ✓. name → OpenClaw pending.

L04locked

founder, low

"couldn't be it."

L05building

vision/infra

→ centered plain type (decided).

L06locked

founder, turn

"started building."

L07locked

Floom reveal

real mark + readable caption.

L08building

establishing

9/10. active-item-focus refine rendering.

L09building

spawn + agent logos

8.5. prompt-centered focus refine rendering.

L10building

schedules/triggers

9/10. cron+triggers, PIP fixed. focus refine.

L11building

secured/sandboxed

9/10. → 3 visuals (logged/secured/sandboxed) refine.

L12building

model-agnostic/OSS

9/10. fixing composition + "open-source" cutoff + one-by-one.

L13locked

founder, mission

"about one thing:"

L14building

drudgery

real footage + type. line → "Stop doing work you shouldn't."

L15building

This is Floom

→ simple mark + wordmark (decided).

L16building

Time is life

field MOTION ✓. → extend to ~5-6s + keep subtext.

Cross-cutting modules

Voice (VO)de-essed, presence restored — sibilance gonelocked

Music / mixmix_v4 balanced (VO leads, swell at "time is life"). Needs a warm tail extension for the longer L16.building

Sound design (SFX)sample done (listen) — needs your ear, then the full-film passopen

CaptionsApple-grade, ≤2 rows. Active word → blue (decided), pending the passbuilding

Closing CTA→ minimal mark + floom.dev (decided), pending the passbuilding

Palettewarm footage / cool product — contrast kept (you + both AIs)locked

Transitionsdissolves + L07→L08 orb match-cut in. Holistic pass after assembly.building

Orb continuitymake the blue orb a deliberate through-line (sold→dies→reborn→works). Judge on the full cut.open

Product copyprompt example / triggers / providers / repo card / tone (micro-decisions 6–10) — decide vs the refined beatsopen

Grade / pacingfinish grade in; final pacing + grade polish judged on the assembled cutopen

Anything else to discuss = the OPEN four:
1. SFX — your ear on the sample, then I do the full pass. 2. Product copy (micro 6–10) — against the refined beats. 3. Orb-as-character through-line. 4. Pacing + grade polish — both only make sense on the assembled cut.

Everything else is either locked or decided-and-building. The path: product refine render lands → one FullFilm pass (all the "building" narrative items) → full assembled cut → we watch it together for the open four.