Floom film — storyboard (the whole arc)
Every beat with its VO line and current status, so you can flag anything in one pass — copy, a weak beat, pacing, whatever jumps out. Frames are from the latest cut (product beats shown as the old dark cards — they're being rebuilt to the white-card UI right now).
done rebuilding (white-card product) needs your call
"OpenClaw scammed us."
Real OpenClaw logo on the founder. The betrayal cold open.
"They sold us this vision of autonomous agents that run 24/7… available via WhatsApp."
THE DREAM. Has flat AI orbs baked into stock-ish b-roll. Needs a real visual — what should "the dream" look like? (devices lighting up with agent activity? the orb working across WhatsApp/Telegram?)
"But then everything broke, and we went back to the manual work."
IT BROKE. Same baked-orb b-roll issue. The "crash / back to drudgery" moment — needs a real visual concept.
"We realized this couldn't be it."
Founder, low moment.
"The vision was right. The infrastructure wasn't."
Cool title card, cinematic type (treatment A).
"So we started building."
Founder, the turn.
"Two months later, we're launching Floom."
Brand reveal — real Floom mark on cool ground.
"A platform for autonomous background agents that actually work."
→ white-card product UI (establishing).
"You can spawn agents with a single prompt."
→ white-card: prompt → worker output card.
"They run in the background, ask for approval, and wake on schedules or triggers."
→ white-card: trigger cards (Gmail/Calendar/schedule).
"Every run is logged, secure, and sandboxed."
→ white-card: approval + sandboxed/logged.
"Zero lock-in. Fully model-agnostic and open source."
→ white-card: provider logos + GitHub repo.
"Because for us, it's about one thing:"
Founder, into the mission.
"People spending time on work they shouldn't have to do."
FIXED — real drudgery footage + cinematic type, no card.
"This is Floom."
Attractor loop + brand lockup on cool ground.
"Time is life."
FIXED — field-running finale + cinematic type, no grey box.